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Originally Posted by Avenger
A marvellous attempt indeed! Your views kept me bound to the essay till the end,so, kudos for that! However, I felt that some of your sentences were too short maybe because of unnecessary fullstops.(It felt like you could have gone on but nipped the thought and began anew in another sentence). Stay blessed.
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Oh! Thanks a lot Dear. Stay blessed.
Yes, one must be kept bound.