Thursday, August 09, 2012
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Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: Digri, Mirpurkhas
Posts: 273
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Quote:
Originally Posted by alihashmatkhoso
dear brother your first sentence isn't effective one, as a very beautiful sentence of Quaid-e- azam that Pakistan came into being when first Indian embraced Islam" and two nation theory came into being, and in the region of 2nd pious caliph Hazrat umar (ra) first man of sub-continent came into fold of Islam. and Muslim came in sub-continent in region of ummyad caliph Abul Mlik so its wrong concept. because it is very first sentence of your answer thats why, creating bade image of your sentence.... over all good attempt and according to me you deserve 12/20 keep it up you have ability, confident and knowledge Inshall you will hit your target best of luck.....
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Thanx a lot for identifying my mistakes, I shall try not to commit them in next attempt.
Regards
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