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Originally Posted by ssara
Outstanding. You have mentioned many informative things in it according to the topic of your essay. if you make your introduction like dramatic or more philosophical style then you will be rocking because your expressions are wonderful.
pearlyS please take part in Pakistan Affairs' portion we are attempting the past papers there....Please come down there and comment. We need your precious comments and guidance........
We are waiting for you..............
Thanks
Sara.....
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Dear sara that pak-aff thread is irresistible, i shall take part for sure..thanks for encouragement!
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Originally Posted by Nazi Orakzai
Nice piece of work.. Keep it up..
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Nazi Orakzai do guide about betterment as well,anyhow thanks
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Originally Posted by alihashmatkhoso
no doubt your intro is good enough but you missed some points like
how many policies made by different governments yet?
polices may proved well if if government implanted them. that i know you must write that lake of implementation of policies.
over all outstanding attempt keep it up, it deserve reasonable marks. 
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Ali khoso thanks for pointing out,i mentioned those points in outline..kindly keep on checking my work & do necessary rectification too ...!