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Originally Posted by nabilach
in the very first line there should be 'has been' because 'is been' not makes any sense or just 'is' can be used here
2) not 'quiet' but 'quite' here
3) for country not 'his' is used but 'her'
4) either 'while' or 'on contrary' can be used, as the use of both does not seem appropriate
5) what is 'world countries' ? it can be countries of the world
dear all these mistakes are my point of view regarding your writing. you can consult any book or senior for further assurance..
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I had noticed the mistakes highlited by you, as I mentioned it was my maiden attempt.
Yes I meant countries of world by placing "wold countries"
I am looking forward for seeking guidlines by U in coming days !