Here is my very first attempt at expansion. It is kind of very rough and I think I have deviated from main theme. Need suggestions specially stressing sentence structure and grammar.

Thank you.

Adopting unchecked Western life styles.

Expansion:

Western lifestyle is a set of norms and values which is followed by people in west. It is a liberal, non-traditional and popular culture which is in complete conflict with our eastern Islamic culture. Due to increasing globalization, economies of many countries are greatly weaved together and are extremely dependent on western economies due to their great economic might. With this increasing trade, cultural exchange and modernization is rampant. As western countries are dominating in economics sphere, we tend to adopt their cultures too. Because it is evident in history that countries which are powerful in economic terms its culture is influenced on developing countries. This increasing infusion of western cultures is being adopting without any hindrance or objection by the masses. Pre-marital sex, western immodest dresses, alcoholism, drug culture and vulgarity are a few of the many evils of western culture which have infiltrated our society completely at various levels. This has led to numerous problems for our culture, our society and for nation as a whole. The western trend has presently grown deep roots in our society; it is difficult or nearly impossible to eradicate values completely from our culture in short term. What can be done is to create awareness and affection for our own culture and values. We should market our own culture and beliefs to people. Our Islamic values and eastern traditions should be encouraged at school level with the collaboration of parents. There is a lot that can be done to promote our culture and to curb the growing strength of westernization but the fact is, in reality, no matter how hard we try, it will not produce desired results until and unless we do not work on economic influence. As long as we are developing country and westerners are developed and rich, we will always tend to be influenced by their culture, it’s in human nature.

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