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Originally Posted by fadk
Thank you everyone for pointing out my mistakes. Some mistakes were due typing errors but I learnt a lot.
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You are always welcome dear fellow.. Pleasure is all ours.. We will keep trying to help as far as our caliber and knowledge enables us to..
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Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed
Dear, You are not speaking on very Topic.
In First Para, I see no sign where you have spoken about EMPTY VESSELS MAKE MUCH NOISE.
In 2nd Para, A little consideration is given to topic.
In 3rd Para, I see nothing about the Topic.
Dear, In very first lines you have to speak about the expansion. You have to speak on only line. You have to expand it through argument, examples, statements and quotations.
Stay at the topic. Think what topic asks. When you understand it fully, start writing.
Hope, you understand what I say. Work on this thing, you have good writing skills. |
I agree.. Well, Zuhaib, why don't you write over the same line as a specimen for him.. I would love to see yours one..