Originally Posted by parwarsha

Great effort by shakeel gori

But a few things I think should be reorganized ….

First Para : Background Second : definitions
Third: little lengthy ….. I think one should ans like that psychology has evolved from simple study of ________ to encompass a variety of fields ……. & then inclusion of Fourth para in third.

Also one must name some of its branches here…….

In comparison Sara starts her ans in really unique & Impressive style……

Following the question,
Q:1-Define Psychology and write in brief about various schools of thought in psychology? (Marsks 20)

Sara focused more on second part of question than first part, I think this is risky….
A little more should be added for first part……

This is my humble opinion …..