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Old Saturday, October 20, 2012
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Originally Posted by Arooje Nasir View Post
Unhappiness is best defined as the differences between our talent and our expectations
Man expects to conquer whole world but his self esteem shatter when what he plans on basis of his talent proves false. And then the clouds of dark moon “the unhappiness” surround his soul. These feelings of melancholy prevailing around man after failure disturb his contended peace of mind. The walls of expectation constructed by bricks of talent turns into misery.
There could be many reasons behind smiling face and happy life but mourning is caused only by one prominent reason “The dissatisfaction” of mind and soul, when things don’t happen the way they are expected to be. The best example is of an artisan, who can draw, shape, and design any piece with his hands and brainpower but these efforts never fulfills his demands and never gain the status he deserve in the society. Therefore, this misery transforms his intellect into puzzle which then can never be solved.
Capable person dreams to win on cost of his qualities and begin journey of expectations. He might get tired on long road of expectations but the charm of destiny makes him forget this pain. But a moment comes when blind end comes and he fails to reach on highway of success. Professionals like doctors, engineers, are example of this tragic trauma, they study hard to draw what their intellect ought to have but not all reach to that height of success.
As a consequence of this failure man never lives the life he expected and this give rise to negative emotions. Negative emotions grounds unpleasant feelings of distress in life. Being human it is impossible to predict what God has decided for us. One should over come such feelings, to prevent flavor of natural happiness in life.
I guess its ur first attempt, and if it is so, its very well.. There are some grammatical mistakes, some mistakes in the use of the definite article, some problems regarding the subject-verb agreement..
I haven't checked the length of ur expansion.. Make sure it ranges between 250-300..
Anyway, a good attempt.. You seem to have a good style of expression. It needs polishing and refining and you will write pretty well..
Keep practicing..
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