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Originally Posted by kamran_shaikh
The will power plays pivotal role in man's life. It gives impetus to preserverance and hardwork. Man often faces intractable problems in this day to day life. He engulfed by the unplatable stumbling blocks tries to find vistas for overcoming the hurdles.It is, in fact, the power of will that enables him to think over the solutions and deal with the despicable situations with iron hand. The success of Bill Gates is archetypal example in this respect. He had to confront failures in the university life and was driven out of it because of his pathetic performance.Beyond all shadows of aspersions, it was the will power that enabled Bill Gates to muster up the courage and do untiring struggle to achieve towering heights. Resultantly, he rose to immense heights by establishing Microsoft Corporation and tendering break through in technological world. Thus, will power augered him plausible results.Similarly, Alexander The Great would not have successfully conquired more than half of the world, had he lacked confidence in him and his magnificent strategies.
On the contrary, absence of will power pesters man to teeter on the brink of disasters.True, the lack of will power makes him despondent and a pessimist one. The daunting challeges that engulf man are dealt with reluctance,lack of confidence, lack of determination and uncertainty. The rule of the muslims who were scanty in the sub-continent as compare to Hindus over the latter bears the vindication of the fact. The lack of will power on the part of Hindus procured the muslims with oppotunity to prolong their rule and govern over them unflinchingly. Same was the case with Muslims when britians came into the skirts of power. The lack of stern will power to develop the capablities and take concrete steps in order to control the widening influnce of Britians on part of the Muslims enabled the latter to rule over Sub-continent by the hook or by the crook that reduced the rule of Muslims to naught.thus, absence of will spawns nothing but failures and miseries.
The crux of the matter is that the will power is stepping stone to success in life. Man has to be willful, if he wants to whittle away his reprehensible problems. The desire to achieve certain goal leads towards the articulation of ways that may usher his destiny in right direction. However, the lack of will exacerbates the already pathetic situation for man. He continues to face the music, if there is no will. Thus, it is rightly said that where there is a will, there is a way.
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Kamran:
You have certainly an impressive written expression. Your Expansion sounds good and attractive too.It fulfills the requirement of a good.Keep it up.Meanwhile, there are some words and sentences in your expansion, meaning of which is totally ambiguous(may be for me).I also found some spelling mistakes, which can be pointed out easily. These maybe your typing mistakes.Spelling of Some words like:
Preseverance(Incorrect): perseverance (correct)
Unplatable(Incorrect): Unpalatable (correct)
Conquired(Incorrect):Conquered
Never underestimate such littler blunders, concentrate on your spellings, punctuations, and avoid using any ambiguous words and, you will be able to compose an outstanding expansion..
tc