Originally Posted by engr.Mansoor

Please check my start and ending of Essay (Energy Crisis) and let me know whether it was worth good or not.
"Student with a pen looking at his book in dark room, Childs weeping with their mothers fanning them with hands, an unending queue of vehicles and humans on petrol and CNG stations, a fierce crowd burning tyres on road; ready to kill or be killed' protesting. Patients crying with pain cursing hot weather and Govt. This is neither a trailer of an action movie nor an excerpt from a novel. This is the true picture of world seventh Nuclear power, one of the richest country in coal and gas reserves-Pakistan which is facing the severe energy crisis of the history."
This was my start of essay
In the end I gave optimistic vision and ended my essay by Robert Frost quote
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have the promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep."

Please analyze and let me know.
Regards
Mansoor Arshad Khattak.

Originally Posted by TheUniter

Senior, comments please.



“Next in importance to freedom and justice is the idea of popular education without which neither freedom nor justice can be maintained.” (A. Garfield)

Introduction
Importance
Critical analysis:
1. Infrastructure
2. Poverty
3. Corruption
4. Lack of check and balance
5. Obsolete curricula
6. Privatization
7. No merit in appointment
8. Political intervention
9. Law and order problem
10. Tribalism
11. Lack of funds
12. Low budget allocated
13. Apathy to female education
14. Poor adult education
15. Attitude of indifference
16. Politicization
17. Lack of research
18. Poor state of higher education
19. Impact of disasters
20. Neglected technical education
21. Unfair exam system
22. Inequality
23. High dropout
24. Feudalism
Impacts:
1. Unemployment
2. Extremism
3. Terrorism
4. Poor economic condition
5. Political instability
6. Social chaos
Suggestions:
1. Check and balance
2. Implementation
3. Good governance
4. Effective planning and management
5. Role of media
6. Standardized primary education
7. Revision of curricula
8. Funding by NGOs, Universities and Govt
9. Technical education
10. Increased access to education
11. Merit based appointments
12. Education without politics
13. Female education should be paid attention along with adult education
Conclusion