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Originally Posted by ravian786
Farah Zafar, I know its not a relevant thread to ask. But expression and correct English being a pre requisite of essay, I would like to get my article, in todays Dawn, checked by you.please do so.link is given
http://www.google.com.pk/url?sa=t&rc...1krg47_8mHTycQ
regards |
Well written !
Why are they ruthlessly killing people indifferently?
You have used two adverbs unnecessarily.It seems awkward.It should be,"Why are they killing people ruthlessly?"
I was astonished to hear the AG’s reply when the court asked him to inform
as
to how the provincial government
has planned curbing violence in the city.
It should be
had as it is indirect speech and sentence is in past tense.
I think
to should be omitted.
The need of the hour
is to carry out a collective effort on the part..........
is should be added.