i attempted the essay on critical analysis of education systems in pakistan and got 45 marks. My outline was introduction, Historical perspective, prevalent education systems,(detailed description of each:institutions,expenditure,manpower),comparativ e advantages and disadvantages of each, systemic bottlenecks inherent in these systems,current steps taken and future recommendations and solutions, conclusion. I started the essay with statement of Quaid-e -azam regarding the importance of education. i wrote short paragraphs, lucid language,current incidents of violence and murders, frustration prevalent in the campuses.