Thursday, November 15, 2012
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Makhzan-e-Urdu Adab
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Join Date: May 2010
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Originally Posted by ravian786
Thanks for your time and correction dear, a few mistakes were mine and few were typing errors of the editor, I guess. so is this expression fine enough to pass essay, u passed two times so you are in a better position to advise  |
That was fine expression.Keep in mind a few points,
- Don't ask questions in essay.
- Your approach should be objective.
- Emotional sentences must be avoided.
- There should not be repetition of words or sentences like as 'burning,burning,burning'
All the best!
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Originally Posted by raja najam
FARAH as i m in Faisalabad and dont find any experienced teacher to get my writings checked from. So, what do you suggest me to do? I m very much worried as only due to the unavailability of a teacher is compelling me to delay my attempt which i dont want to do.
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Kips is there.Why don't you join it?
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Originally Posted by sidra siyal
Way to Go sis your efforts are highly commendable  Also,I want to ask that Is there any one particular writer,whose style we could follow ?? :S |
One must not follow anyone.Style should be one's own.Read others but don't copy them. Originality ensures one's success.
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