Originally Posted by faixa

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Long before the advent of Islam, India had closed relations with other countries because of trade and business purposes. After the completion(advent) of Islam, a complete deen, when it appeared and introduced into India, where there was caste system, supremacy of Hinduism over other religions. Most of the people began to accept Islam.( Islam was introduced in India and inspired them at the time when there was deplorable caste system.As a result, most of the people started to embrace Islam.) Whereas,( On the other hand), Muhammad Bin Qasim's also attacked upon(on) Sindh.an other important historical event which influenced the people from Islam( of subcontinent).(This historical event also helped to spread the Islam). Similarly, after him(Muhammad bin Qasim), Mahmud Ghauri and Ghaznavid had also done(also achieved) amazing works(many victories) which proved very helpful.in dissemination of Islam. Eventually, Islam had been(Was) further spread introduced by other five dynasties which are (were) khilji, sayed, lodhi and so on (alike). In addition, In this connection from(no need of this) 1526 to 1707, Mughals boosted Islam and explored it to the other regions. Nevertheless, from 1857 to 1947 Britishers ruled over India as ruler of a colony. Eventually(Finally)( variety of transitional words should be there), Islam provided an outstanding ideology to the people of Muslim regions(through out the world) and Ideology of Pakistan took place finally Pakistan came on the world map (which culminated with the birth of Pakistan) on 14th August, 1947.