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Originally Posted by MisbahMalik
Good attempt ... Seniors and other members will evaluate your expansion but here I want to say that your writing lacks "imagination" and expansion of some proverb demands it. Good luck!  |
Then you have to tell what is required. what type of imagination it needs and what should be the content .
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