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charm strikes the sight but merit wins the soul
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Saturday, December 01, 2012
IMTIAZ AHMAD KHAN
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Good attempt but requires improvement.There are some spelling as well as grammatical errors that can be corrected through constant practice and guidelines.Spliting it into appropriate paragraphs,maximum 3,can enhance its beauty.
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