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Quiet women revolution is beneficial for new generation

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Thesis statement

Women emancipation is a good sign after continual dismal and apathy of their stature which will diminish sexism and run forth a brilliant procreant leading nations towards success and progress.



Outline .


1. Women Emancipation --Introduction

i)Evolution of society and women .
ii)Generalization about their status .
iii)Mohammad(P.B.U.H)-the greatest feminist .
iv)spinal cord of society --women.
iii)Thesis statement.


2.women in past and in present .



i)Extermination from heaven .
ii)The brief study of civilizations.
iii) Social and economic insecurities .
iv)Function of Media.

3.Ramifications of Quiet women Revolution.

i) Gender gap ,Sexism male chauvinism .
ii)over-population ,carrying capacity .
iii)Qualified offspring.
iv) Eradication of old obsolete customs --dowry ,revocation of dower and denial rights in property .
v) Child labor .
vii)participation in politics,civil services and in other fields.


4.what new society will Inherits.



I)Free democrat society .
ii) Entrepreneurs class vs landlords .
iii)Equal status of each gender .
iv)The essence of Islamic society.


5.Recommendations for further development

i) Reciprocation of Islamic values in modern ones-- by cultural means
ii)Promotion of education.
iii)Laws and legislation ---via parliamentary process.


6.Conclusion.

It is also worthwhile to state that the status which women reached today in the west was not achieved due to the kindness of men or natural progress. It was rather achieved through her long struggle and sacrifices and only when society needed her contribution and work, more especially during the Two World Wars and due to the escalation of technological change.




Quiet women revolution is beneficial for new generation.

It is oft-quoted behind the success of every man, there is a veiled women.They are the source of motivation for men ;they in turn formulate the ways of living. If women would not be on the earth then there would be no humans ,no industries and no change.In fact women bring change in the society.Unfortunately they are considered only source of procreation and pleasure .They are degraded and ridiculed by men.Tragically ,we forgot Holy prophet (P.B.U.H) was a greatest feminist and denied their due status . Muhammad --the Holy Prophet(P.B.U.H) uplifted women from abjection and abasement .He introduced family system replacing tribal ones.Their importance can not be denied because their role is like jugular vein in society .They shaped families and respective institutions onto which nations`journey towards success is required .These are females who have precursed social changes and in each era change is modified by them.Women emancipation is a good sign after continual dismal and apathy of their stature which will diminish sexism and run forth a brilliant procreant ? leading nations towards success and progress.


The men consider women derogatory creature .Their status is generalized when Adam tasted the fruit of "forbidden tree".Eve had induced Adam to taste it .Man thought women always induce towards wrong path.Past civilization never had given their right status.Hindus` civilization is one of the world oldest one;where women are considered "untouchables"..They had been burnt with the death of their husbands(satti custom)The Widows had to live all life in white clad.In Christianity women were encouraged to acquire the status of Nuns.pre-Islmaic Arabia conditions was most pathetic where little female children were buried alive.All authorities were given to men considering women occupation is in her abode. Their denied participation in trade politics and jurisprudence originated social injustice; the sole cause of social change.They new ray of social change has been because they were denied from their due share in property.In rural areas their marriages with Quran -e-pak and revocation of dower are main causes . Women have decided to face challenges and most of the urban women have become more stronger then men.We have girls like Arfa Kareem ,Malala yousaf zai ,women like Hilary clinton ,Hina Rabbani khar , Barbara Boxer, Maria Cantwel,Susan Collins.These women belonging to urban culture have set a model role for deprived rural women community.Now women have raised their voice and trying to put down the fire of sexism.

I do not think, sir, you have any right to command me, merely because you are older than I, or because you have seen more of the world than I have; your claim to superiority depends on the use you have made of your time and experience.”

(Charlotte Brontė)
They knew they can get their right entering first in the field of education and then politics .So despite of poor literacy rates Pakistan`s ,Indian and Bangladesh`s women are premier ,foreign ministers and political leaders.Fashion industries and media corporates aimed to advertise their business and their subject is women.The idea have gained currency women is only created for men .Women have imitated this idea through media but educated and literate women have now fully acquainted where they have to take things and which ideals need dumping. Media instead of portraying good jobs of women focused more on the brands of their hand bags ,wrist watches and shoes. Which have narrowed the scope and importance of women in role in current scenario.

I hate to hear you talk about all women as if they were fine ladies instead of rational creatures. None of us want to be in calm waters all our lives.”
― Jane Austen


Women emancipation is a good omen because it will imprint the future ; It will diminish gender discrimination ,gap and prejudicial behavior towards women.Ultimately ,male chauvinistic will likely to become myths of past .Women participation in political and economy not only have made them powerful but it will counterbalance the population explosion ,raise middle class participation and will generate human as well as natural and artificial resources.Their stature is generating creative and qualified offspring and youngsters have become acquainted with technological know-how .Male threatened women in past for dowry and adamant to give them dower.Most women have approached towards courts and media knowing the fact of their power .Many women have become legends for men in political arena .They are employing themselves in politics and civil services which is great .achievement on their part.


Women now hold 78 of the 342 seats in the National Assembly, and in July, Hina Rabbani Khar, 34, became Pakistan's first female Foreign Minister. “The cultural norms regarding women in the workplace have changed



No doubt ,women have pioneered in many fields like many have become dramas` executives ,artists ,politicians ,ambassadors, singers and writers and sports women. These have won prizes on international level too.But despite this fact ,large faction of women is underdeveloped just because middle class faction is minor in % Pakistan as well as in South Asian countries too. so these women are trend setters for these deprived rural faction who is under abasement and even do not know how to get free from these obsolete norms and folkways.so these will lead towards free democrat society where women were not questioned and valued as per their birth but for their qualification(I'm not getting it.). .Now women are competing men as entrepreneurs where as major portion of landlord class do not want this change.This will collapsed their small dominions and their prestige will be lost in their constituencies .That`s why ratio of women in parliament have been increased .Their higher representation will create balance of power between two genders .Their equal status and liberty is advised in Islam .Indirectly women equal status will harmonize Islamic society.We will find teachers ,learned women like Umul Momeeneen--Hazrat Ayesha (R.A) to whom prophets`companions asked jurisprudence questions.We will have mothers like Umme-Abdullah(R.A) who supported his son to stood against evil .

Pakistan`s society is moving towards transitional phase ;tribal culture to democrat one.Many documentaries are promoting this cultural change. Like ''saving face ,14 women have won prizes by international community .Women`aspirations and their deprivation are channeled on dramas as well . So Islamic culture being promoted .Pakistan`s media is provoking educational programmes encompassing social change .Parliament is passing many bills for the protection of women on workplaces. Many laws have been repealed and modified .It is also perhaps not a coincidence that the first Pakistani law against sexual harassment in the workplace was passed in 2011. Perhaps politicians now feel that urban women are an increasingly important electoral constituency.

Women` rights and their education is in MDG .Pakistan though is not able to achieve fully but heading towards it . Women are best organizers and will able to shape new dimension of society .It is also worthwhile to state that the status which women reached today in the west was not achieved due to the kindness of men or natural progress. It was rather achieved through her long struggle and sacrifices and only when society needed her contribution and work, more especially during the Two World Wars and due to the escalation of technological change.
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