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Originally Posted by Afshan Choudary
Precise 2005
Psychoses and neuroses: mental disorders
Psychoses and neuroses are mental illnesses which make man unable to keep balance in his life. In psychoses, complete breakdown of ego takes place. When men become fail to achieve goal of his life, he cannot shift his energy towards another task. In strong emotional sickness, he behaves like animal. And in less severe emotional sickness, he may use excessively one of the four mental functions at the cost of other three. In emotional disorders, whatever the severity is, he become fail to maintain proper balance in life. Such disorders do not cause cultural deviance rather t is deviance form himself. On the other hand, neurosis is strange behavior which may vary from culture to culture. (Total word count 116)
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Psychoses and neuroses are mental illnesses which make man unable to keep balance in his life. In psychoses, complete breakdown of ego takes place. When men become (are) fail (failed) to achieve (their goals) goal of his life, he (you used men- plural) cannot shift his energy (energies) towards another task. In strong emotional sickness, he behaves like (an) animal. (why full stop?) And in less severe emotional sickness, he may use excessively one of the four mental functions at the cost of other three. In emotional disorders, whatever the severity is, he become fail to maintain (a) proper balance in life. Such disorders do not cause cultural deviance rather t is deviance form himself. On the other hand (on the other hand is used when we are comparing two arguments), neurosis is strange behavior which may vary from culture to culture.