Originally Posted by Nazi Orakzai

( Intro is too lengthy, try to reduce its length)

Outline should be:
Women status in Pakistan:
“No nation can rise to the height of glory unless your women are side by side with you. We are victims of evil customs. It is a crime against humanity that our women are shut up within the four walls of the houses as prisoners. There is no sanction anywhere for the deplorable condition in which our women have to live.”
Quaid.i.Azam

“With the rapid awareness through print ant electronic media, there has been considerable improvement in women status in the recent years”.

Status of Women in Pakistan

Hurdles and challenges.

Efforts made by govt.

Suggestions

Conclusion.