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Originally Posted by shahrozali View Post
If Winter comes,can Spring be far behind.

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http://englishtest.mobi/forum_mp3/203469.mp3

http://forum.wordreference.com/showthread.php?t=1365855

Listen the use of when ever.You have wrongly used it .your first sentence should not be too large .

Whenever a man is naturally or artifecially(wrong spelling,second word is inappropriate )is gifted with the new and joyful moments he keeps his previous sorrowful and bitter moments far behind(it is an adjective ,either your sentence structure is broken or is inappropriate to use it here ).A man is hunted of(word is not right here ) various griefs and troubles,and when those crying sorrows or pains go away,his face as well as his feelings reborn(What does it means )(so long sentence .what you want to say ?[/U]It is (why is ? with words ?)(verb ??????)well-elaborated words(which word ?) that forget what you suffered,possessed or utilized,and start to sanction(sanction is used in legal terms ) in a newly way what you enjoy,own or apply on daily routine.[/COLOR]


Do you know dear what you have written there ? suffered ,possessed with utilized --you have used three different irrelevant actions is same sentence



History is replete of such instances in which new objects were warmly welcomed and old ones were placed far behind.Before advent of Islam,Arabs used to practise their prayers bowing down towards self-creation idols.Hazrat Muhammed`s teaching and preaching brought out the and real rational religion for human beings.As the result,They recognized their idolatory worthless and baseless,and accepted the new and believable religion.

Man,Before Modern Technology,used to exercise letters to ask to know one`s health,problems,etc.Furthermore,if one wished to contact someone he/she had to go there on foot or through transport.But new Technology alleviated such troubles by providing human beings Mobile phone,computer,etc through which he/she is able to message,email and be connected. As the result,New Technology has been willingly approved and old ones remained far behind.

Conclusively,to greet what is in present is better than to forget what was in past.It is foolish to memorize troubles,pains and unwillingly done objects rather than to enjoy prevalent favourable or unfavourable moments.When the new and natural objects come other ones can automatically be far behind.Hence,Human beings must to approach upcoming or present conditions willingly,and ought not to emphasize to seek going ones.
There are numerous mistakes in rest of passage as well . And if you any doubts then you may consult with other member as well .You do not know what you have to say and how to address the topic .You need to focus on theme first ,then formulate ideas that you have to write .Third is ,are you writing it in a correct manner .It matters ! If i am wrong then apology in advance .
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