Fair enough but u have to follow the following pattern..........
I- Introduction
----Define democracy
----Failure of a government doesn't mean failure of a system(Democracy)
----Latest attempts which have fortified democracy i.e 18 Ammendment,NFC, Balochistan package etc
II-Causes of Failure of Democratic regimes in the past
----Delay in constitution making.
----Leadership vacuum.
----Frequent military interventions.
----Debacle of East Pakistan.
----Strong federation.
----Weak local government system.
----Fragile Institutions especially Judiciary.
----Incompetent and corrupt leaders.
----Lack of political harmony.
----Rift between Institutions.
----High illiteracy rate.
----Improper system of checks and balances.
III-Does democracy suit Pakistan?
Yes (Justifications).....
----Democracy is actually an Islamic system of Governance.(Concept of shura, and as Pakistan was conceived on the ideology of Islam, so democracy is the only system of government which suit Pakistan )
----Quaid's views regarding form of Government in Pakistan.
----Experience gained through military regimes.
----Political dynamics of South Asia in specific and Asia in general.
----An overview of the success stories of some modern democracies of the world(Britain and America)
----Comparison with other forms of government as a litmus test in Pakistan's case.
----What form of government did Iqbal envisaged for a Muslim state?
IV-How democracy be strengthened in Pakistan?
----Provincial autonomy.
----Proper system of checks and balances.
----Agricultural and Industrial Reforms.
----Poverty alleviation measures.
----Educational reforms.
----Political harmony and stability.
----Collaboration of all the Institutions of the state.
----Proper strategies to address the menace of Energy Crisis.
----Supremacy of law and constitution.
----ensuring the provision of Fundamental rights.
----Transfer of power to the grass root level.(Devolution of power)
----Time to review our foreign policy.
V- Conclusion.
Hope this would be enough and sorry for the delayed response........