Dear Asima Khan...

I have been through your precis. I appreciate your effort to venture into this arduous task. First of all i would want to comment on your English. Its pretty weak as i guess from the English you used. No matter, it will improve with practice, so please carry on.
As regard precis, it is some thing requires deep reading, reding and reading. And once you grasp its idea, you have to express it clearly in shortest possible text, but remember not to skip important points.

Now come to the text which you have chosen from Dawn newspaper. There are few main points in this text as below.

1. Annual economic review is almost the same as previous one.
2. Few basic reforms need to be done.
3. It is difficult that present government will do these reforms if they could not do it in last five years.
4. Next Government will give it priority.

You have missed these important points.So please read the text again with these points in mind and reproduce it. Hope it will improve much. Just keep on. Because practice makes a man perfect.

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