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Charms strike the sight but merit wins the soul
Many people think from their eyes and do not bother to use their gray matter. This is very common observation that a well-dressed person is highly regarded by the masses as compare to a modest+ly wearing person. The reason merely is the charm of the sight and the impression of status that paralyze+s the ability of judgment. With this irresponsible behavior, the injustice is done with the meritorious ones. It has become a norm of today's world; business firms are specially training their employees to make themselves up effectively in order to impress the customers. Such measures greatly improve the sale of the product. Leaving aside some reputed organizations, some enterprises are deceiving people in disguise. The truth, later on, discloses over the purchaser that the product is not up to the mark. However, contrary to this phenomenon, a well-recognized and quality product does not need such flattering tricks. The quality and merit of the product speaks volumes about its utility for the customers. Whether the salesperson is sitting on the footpath or whether the product is in an ordinary pack, the pervious satisfaction of the customer would not bother to see the charm; purchasers would only judge by the satisfactory response of the product that had previously got by them. Therefore, new products, which are defective in their merits but attractive in their packaging, would never be able to win the soul of the customers over the product having some merit in its quality. Hence, charm strikes the sight but merit wins the soul.
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Please look the things I've italicised.Try to think what's wrong with them and give them in a separate post,I'll try to tell you how you can improve them.Moreover,all of your spellings are in American English try to convert them in the standard British English,e.g.,gray into grey,paralyze into paralyse,behavior into behaviour.The rest search for yourself.I can presume you have been predominantly reading books of American authors during your studentship.However,I appreciate your development of the thesis.
...Yasser