Dear,
Good outline, but many parts of ur outline r not relevant to the topic. For example: importance of education
benefits of education
how to raise education/litercy level
higher education
education in pakistan
education sector reforms
gender education
national educational policy
causes & failure of education in pakistan
purpose of education
suggestion for improvement of eduction in pakistan
these r the parts that i deem irrelevant. Best of luck for ur results. But that is how i view ur essay. Anyways...all the best