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Old Saturday, March 23, 2013
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i also wrote on meaning and purpose of education but my outline as not comprehensive as nazish

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Originally Posted by Arooje Nasir View Post
i wrote on purpose and meaning of education
in thesis statement i wrote that education in pakistan is failed to deliver its meaning and purpose and thn in outline i mentioned causes y it failed to deliver its purpose , its effects on society, and then suggestions to make it fulfill its purpose

i dun know my approach is correct or not....
i think thesis statement ma pkistan k zikar nahi ata

i think there is need of subheading in your main outline then it will make your outlines more comprehensive and elaborative bcoz you wrote 1000 words
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