Meaning and purpose of Education

I started in this way;

"British philosopher thomas Hobbes said that man in his state of nature is unsocial,poor,solitary and nasty. He can not bear the happiness of others and thus in order to make him a useful member of society, a proper training is required. Different means are used for this purpose but the education is the best of all of these methods. Education is needed at all levels of society and man at his every stage of life needs proper education......................................... .................................................. .................................and then my theisis statement "education is a broad term used for all the techniques and methods used to impart knowledge into the people and its purposes vary from political to economic, religious to social and even not a single section of human life is spare of the education".

this was my introductory paragraph.........please evaluate it.