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Originally Posted by Aimen khakwani View Post
Growing Population is a threat to stable and prosperous Pakistan.

1- Introduction.

2- Facts about population explosion
a- Global Facts
b- Regional Facts
c- Local Facts.

3- Causes of Growth in Population:
a- Lack of seriousness of politicians to address the sensitive issue.
b- Desire of male child.
c- Misrepresentation of Islamic teachings.
d- Illiteracy.
e-Increase in birth rate and decrease in death rate due to advacement in science.
f- Conservative attitude towards Contraceptives.

4- Implications of Population bomb :-
a-Pressure on land.
b-Double digit Inflation rate.
c- Unemployment.
d- Sub standard of living.
e- Poor management.
f- Increase in illiteracy rate.
g- Increase in Crime rates.
h- Environmental degradation.

5- Suggestions to Cope the hazards of population explosion:-

a- Govt should make efforts to control population.
b- Ulemas should issue fatwas that family planning programs are not against Islam.
c- Campaigns should be arranged to aware the common man.
d- Encourage the woman to use birth control pills.

6- Conclusion.

Introduction :-

Population Explosion is nothing but a curse which is damaging the development of a country. Rapid Growth in population is a threat to a stable and a prosperous Pakistan. Population is considered as an asset but it tends to be a burden when it increases exponentially. Population in Pakistan is increasing at a rate of 2.57 percent per annum. Pakistan is experiencing an unwanted growth. The chief factor behind population explosion is the non seriousness of politicians to comprehend the serious implications of growing population. The desire of a male child,misrepresentation of Islamic teachings and lack of awareness among society are important factors that are leading towards explosion of population bomb. There are serious implications of rapid growth of population. It affects the socioeconomic conditions of the country. Unemployment,inflation,sub-substandard of living and environmental degradation are the outcomes of exponential growth of population. It is the need of hour that govt should take concrete steps to address the serious threat that is hurdle in the growth of a country. Only sincere and dedicated efforts are needed to overcome the dragon of overpopulation.


Please members give me marks. And Shakeel bhai I want to be a part of this group . This will INshaa ALLAh leads us to the roads of success. Please mark my mistakes specially the grammatical one. Please comment on the relevancy, sequence as well as on the clarity of my essay because credit will be given on these parameters. Thanks for starting this thread.
You are welcome dear in this group. Indeed, it will be a highly beneficial and effective exercise.

Your attempt is commendable. As per my knowledge, there is no grammatical mistake. Sequence is quite well. And you have tried to write to the point. This is good. All points which you mentioned in 'consequences of the population explosion' are relevant. Overall a nice effort. Just keep it up. I am giving you 55/100

Please do check my outline and highlight the shortcomings. Besides, all members are requested to send their attempts. InshAllah, very soon we shall be dealing with another topic.

Dear Aliahashmat, I want you to attempt this essay. We genuinely need you here in this group to be an inspiration for us.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Aimen khakwani View Post
Growing Population is a threat to stable and prosperous Pakistan.

1- Introduction.

2- Facts about population explosion
a- Global Facts
b- Regional Facts
c- Local Facts.

3- Causes of Growth in Population:
a- Lack of seriousness of politicians to address the sensitive issue.
b- Desire of male child.
c- Misrepresentation of Islamic teachings.
d- Illiteracy.
e-Increase in birth rate and decrease in death rate due to advacement in science.
f- Conservative attitude towards Contraceptives.

4- Implications of Population bomb :-
a-Pressure on land.
b-Double digit Inflation rate.
c- Unemployment.
d- Sub standard of living.
e- Poor management.
f- Increase in illiteracy rate.
g- Increase in Crime rates.
h- Environmental degradation.

5- Suggestions to Cope the hazards of population explosion:-

a- Govt should make efforts to control population.
b- Ulemas should issue fatwas that family planning programs are not against Islam.
c- Campaigns should be arranged to aware the common man.
d- Encourage the woman to use birth control pills.

6- Conclusion.

Introduction :-

Population Explosion is nothing but a curse which is damaging the development of a country. Rapid Growth in population is a threat to a stable and a prosperous Pakistan. Population is considered as an asset but it tends to be a burden when it increases exponentially. Population in Pakistan is increasing at a rate of 2.57 percent per annum. Pakistan is experiencing an unwanted growth. The chief factor behind population explosion is the non seriousness of politicians to comprehend the serious implications of growing population. The desire of a male child,misrepresentation of Islamic teachings and lack of awareness among society are important factors that are leading towards explosion of population bomb. There are serious implications of rapid growth of population. It affects the socioeconomic conditions of the country. Unemployment,inflation,sub-substandard of living and environmental degradation are the outcomes of exponential growth of population. It is the need of hour that govt should take concrete steps to address the serious threat that is hurdle in the growth of a country. Only sincere and dedicated efforts are needed to overcome the dragon of overpopulation.


Please members give me marks. And Shakeel bhai I want to be a part of this group . This will INshaa ALLAh leads us to the roads of success. Please mark my mistakes specially the grammatical one. Please comment on the relevancy, sequence as well as on the clarity of my essay because credit will be given on these parameters. Thanks for starting this thread.
You are welcome dear in this group. Indeed, it will be a highly beneficial and effective exercise.

Your attempt is commendable. As per my knowledge, there is no grammatical mistake. Sequence is quite well. And you have tried to write to the point. This is good. All points which you mentioned in 'consequences of the population explosion' are relevant. Overall a nice effort. I am giving you 55/100

Please do check my outline and highlight the shortcomings. Besides, all members are requested to send their attempts. InshAllah, very soon we shall be dealing with another topic.

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Originally Posted by sidra naveed View Post
Introduction
(a) definition of population
(b) population growth/ over population

Population growth inpakistan
(a) birth rate
(b) death rate
(c) annual growth rate
(d) Urbanisation

causes of rapid growth of population
(a) Illiteracy
(b) Early marriages
(c) Religious Beliefs
(d) Strong desire for sons
(e) Lack of awareness
(f) Customs and traditions

Growing population and economic stability
1. Meaning of stability and prosperity

2. Factors responsible for economic stability and development
(a) Education facility
(b) Human resources
(c) Better living standard
(d) basic health and educational facilities

3.Impact of over population on prosperity
(a) Unemployment
(b) Lack of basic facilities
(c) poverty
(d) low per capita income
(e) inflation
(f) Voilation of rules and regulations
(g) low living standard

Remidies
(a) Awareness of family planning
(b) launch population welfare programs
(c) Education
(d) rise marriage age

Conclusion

kindly check my outline and point out weaknesses
Nice attempt. You have mentioned almost relevant points; and tried to maintain a balance. However, I think the definition of population is not necessary as a heading to mention in introduction. Moreover, you should also write introduction of essay so that we can justify to some extent your stance on the issue. You deserve 50/100. Just keep it up. We shall soon send another essay topic. I think that it is good if you check others' essays as well and point out mistakes and suggest them useful things.

Besides, all members who are taking part in this endeavor should give their useful suggestions so that we can achieve best out of our efforts.

Why seniors and other prestigious members are not guiding us in this effort and encouraging us by taking part in it? Are we doing something which is but a waste of time having no appreciable outcome?

Last edited by mani g; Thursday, April 04, 2013 at 12:45 AM.
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