Assala-o-Alikum!
Its really good to see someone coming out with an essay of utmost importance both in national and socio-political scenario of the region with persausive use of language. But I would suggest to remain stick to the title of your essay.

Also be clear in your thoughts and views as they are intermingled i.e whether you are discussing peace in soth asia or hegemony of India in the region.

Best Regards