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Old Sunday, April 07, 2013
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good attempt ,but there are few grammatical mistakes in ur expansion

like
Childhood is a (the not a) stage of a person's development

and 13 to 18 year old known as teen agers not child
belw 12 years are known as child

if i am wrong plz correct it

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