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Originally Posted by mehjabeen karim
Critical Analysis Of Education System In Pakistan.
Outline
1.INTRODUCTION
2.EDUCATION SYSTEM( Education system is something else such as formal system, informal etc...you have placed the problems of education system under Education system's head)
*ghost schools
*expensive education
*nepotism
*lack of facilities
*copy culture
*outdated textbooks and lengthy curriculum
*negligiance of co-curricular activities (What does it mean?)
*lack of discipline
3.ECONOMIC ISSUES
*low budget
*low literacy rate
4.TEACHERS PROBLEM AND THEIR STANCE TOWARDS STUDENTS
*absence of teachers
*corporal punishment
*unawarness of pedagogy
5.BAD EDUCATIONAL MANAGEMENT AND GOVERNANCE (don't be so rude... Although our education system is not so good, it is not so bad too. Even if it is you need not express yourself so harshly)
*management problems
*failure of educational council
*bad management/organization of examination hall
*issuance of fake degree certificates
6.CONCLUSION
INTRODUCTION
Education is the backbone of modern society. This is a key for us to move forward in variety of aspects;economic, development, democracy and world peace. As US President Barak Obama affirmed in his address: "In 21st century one of best anti-poverty programe is world class education". The education system of Pakistan lagged behind since creation of Pakistan due to some factors.
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I think this is your initial essay. Let me tell you one thing, critical analysis does not mean you just produce negative/weak/ bad points in your essay. It means you must present the both sides of the picture i.e. positive points coupled with negative points.
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Originally Posted by Hannya
Outline: Critical Analysis Of education systems in Pakistan
1) Introduction
Education is a process of imparting or acquiring knowledge. No human being is able to survive without education. It tells men how to think, how to work properly and how to make decision. Unfortunately our country is deprived of this blessing because of the prevailing serious condition of the Education system here. Consequently, Pakistan is facing from(???) crises of education in the country. Obsolete curriculum, poor infrastructure, lack of governance, low budget allocation, untrained teaching staff and many other factors are responsible for the poor condition of education in Pakistan. This can only be recovered through pragmatic solutions in a right way with hard work and determination.
2) Multiple education systems prevalent in Pakistan.
1. Private
2. Public
3. Madrassah
3) Present scenario
4) Critical analysis of education systems in Pakistan
a) Obsolete curriculum
b) Poor infrastructure
c) Lack of governance
d) Multiplicity of education systems
e) Lack of funds and low budget allocated
f) Inefficient and insufficient training staff
g) Unfair examination system
h) Conventional methods of teaching
i) Lack of accountability
j) Political intervention
k) Neglected technical education
l) Indifference to female education
5) Impacts of the poor education system in Pakistan
a) Unawareness and rise in illiteracy
b) Increase in poverty
c) Rise in unemployment
d) Law and order problem
e) Political instability
6) Pragmatic solutions to improve the prevalent education systems in Pakistan
a) Revision of curriculum
b) Provision of better infrastructure
c) Good Governance
d) Unified Education system in the country
e) Rise in allocation of funds for Education
f) Recruitment of better and experienced teaching staff
g) Checks and balance on Examination system
h) More technical education institutes
i) Awareness for female education
j) Modern methods of teaching.
7) Conclusion.
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Good outline but Introduction needs improvement...