seniors please evaluate my outline. i'm a bit tense abt this one please seniors evaluate my outline and shed some light on as to how i performed.
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Originally Posted by dany k
First i thought of going for "not economy but politics is a key to success" but then thiught otherwise and opted "meanings and purposes of education". Here is the outline open to criticism:
1. Introduction
2. Meaning
3. Islamic view
4. glorious past of muslims
5. west in the dark age
6. perceived purpose of education in pakistan
7. real purposes of education
8. steps to revive education in pak
9. conclusion
Basically, i wrote the real purpose is character building.....muslims in past pursued edu for real purpose....west followed....in pak edu is taken as a means for securing jobs...materialistis...not the real spirit....then i explained the purposes of education (i don't remember much--awareness, character,..)....then i went on to say that there should be competent teachers like those of past to encourage edu to achieve real objectives and suggested some other reforms....in the end i concluded saying that edu obtained to educate one self can raise one to heights!!!
i also think that i should have written '7' before '6'.
please comment and do tell if i was able to comprehend the topic correctly.
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