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Originally Posted by shakeel ghori
Your attempt is good. However, there are few grammatical mistakes in your introduction. You are doing a nice job. Just keep it up.
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Thanks dear. would you please elaborate and correct those grammatical mistakes in my introduction. Last day i read a thread here by administrator mentioning that headlines are no longer used in essay. so it means that these are just here to trigger ideas. therefore i didn't choose suitable wording for that. and i don't think we should focus on that either.