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Old Wednesday, August 01, 2007
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@waqarabro

You are in dire need of improving your sentence structure. Writing a quality essay is quite far if your sentence structure doesn't allow the reader to understand what exactly you mean to say. Read more and more, i.e. newspaper and grammar books, construct short and understandable sentences and then get them checked by some authentic person. Be open to criticism and then you'll learn more.

I'd recommend you to take a start from basic grammar books, and this is mainly because of the fact that your sentences really can't explain their purpose in a standard manner. For instance, "its mean when i shall write the essay me counting how many word's are written by me". This is completely wrong sentence. The correct one will be "It means when I write an essay, I should count the words I've written" OR "It means, I should count the words while writing an essay".

Anyways it's an honest suggestion, NO OFFENSE MEANT!


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Last edited by Qurratulain; Wednesday, August 01, 2007 at 09:05 AM.
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