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Originally Posted by J Hussain
Good Effort considering its your first endeavor. However, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. Pay attention to grammar as much as you can. Also, try to write ideas in simple words, this piece of writing gives a dramatic and vague impression.
It's good that you are working hard, keep it up!
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First of all thanks once again for giving attention to it.
ok i ll do more attention to grammar onwards. but kindly point out major grammatical mistakes if you can. so i ll be in a better position to understand my flaws.