I have met with a person who have secured 72 marks in essay....His command on language was very strong and most importantly his words were exact and properly placed.....language development is natural phenomenon which improves with the passage of time...you cant improve it over the nights...However, for good english a student should read and write as much as he can.....writing is most important which most of the apirants escape.To pass the essay paper, i think your text doesnt have any grammatical or spellings error...avoid use of big words unless sure about their proper meanings,intensity and context.avoid cramming and write as simple as you can.length of essay is also important..for good marks,you need to write more than 2000 words and to pass the exam 13-1700 are sufficient but with that length your marks would be in the range of 40-48............Secondly, relevancy is the most important thing for css.....only relevant material will give you any credit.......Finally,dont believe in conspiracy theories.....knowledge has always been appreciated in css...if someone thinks about luck,i would say yes!!! But it only works in optional subjects which have nothing to do with pass or fail........so guird up your loins sharpen your steel,you ll soon be tested.

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