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Originally Posted by aamirsahim
I attempted the topic " Terrorism- as a new threat to the contemporary world"
My outline was as follows;
1.Introduction
2.Definitions of Terrorism
3.A brief History of Terrorism
4.How this is a threat to the contemporary world ( Effects )
5.Why this has become a threat (Causes)
6.How this threat can be overcome (suggestions)
7.Conclusion
I wrote down 5-6 causes,effects and suggestions for this threat. It was round about 2500-2800 words.
Seniors please evaluate my essay as per relevancy to the topic, length of the essay and explanation of the topic.
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1. usually the effects are produced by causes of something. i mean u shud hv stated the effects after causes of the
threat, rather than vice versa, ........nevertheless your essay,s outline seems on the track..........in case if u hv substatiated it with attractive materials.
2. Terrorism is so widespread cancer that 2500 plus words can not sooth this topic down. But time factor, during 3 hrs , is also imp to take into notice. the rest of your essay looks on the pattern of very simple essay, however remember that
simplicity is the glory of expression
Best of luck to you
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