Please give in indication of the mistake you deem to be more lethal or main cause of your essay failure.
I have figured out following mistakes were there which either took away my essay or were partially responsible for the failure. The people who get blocked by Essay only must share the mistake. Mine were:
1- The last sentence of my essay which was about myth of gender equality, was:
If gender equality is to build a palace then in Pakistan we even have not laid the first brick of it. (This is good for thing and bad for everything, when I am presenting the legislative figures and action taken for the process it means situation is far more better than I described.)
2- I had spelling mistakes very scarce but inadequate use of thick grammar took me down. Along with I was little bit out of track from my outline. I mean some latter topics I described earlier and vice verse.