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Old Wednesday, November 27, 2013
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Originally Posted by Nate View Post
Brother in my three attempts i cleared essay twice.
And according to my view point its not about quantity trust me its about quality writing with powerful english phrases and correct grammer. Vocabulary also plays it role.
Like heres an example
Terrorism is destroying pakistan socially and economically
Or
The scrouge of terrorism is punching holes in the social economical fabric of pakistan.

And for essay always do brainstorming first.
Amd write that essay in which u have command and material. As facts n figures in your essay gives you an imperative authority.
Thanks, You have given wonderful tip. Can you guide me how I improve this structure or phrase ?
Terrorism is destroying pakistan socially and economically
Or
The scrouge of terrorism is punching holes in the social economical fabric of pakistan.
Kindly tell how I bring this change? any book ? any practice ? special grammar structure ?
Thanks
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