Sunday, December 15, 2013
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Originally Posted by IRRAJ
dear correction needed please
it is not much complex thing as you given, it is simply based on your knowledge and logic, and can be approached easily by following three simple points as under
1.. essay must be having your own expression of emotions or thoughts which is stand on your knowledge.
2. essay must be simple that a common man can easily understand (ger maanus ya mushkil alfaaz k istamaal se parhez)
3. organized (har paragraph ek doosre se marboot ho)
or rahi baat grammer or punctuation ki to wo sirf hasb e zrurat hi kafi hy... or haan aham baat ger zruri bakwas se b parhez ho
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My brother, None of your points I have denied. You said that essay must be written according to your natural thoughts, I agreed in my 5th point.
and there is no correction that was needed in my suggestions, every sagacious person would agree.
Now I make a correction in your text:
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Originally Posted by IRRAJ
which is stand on your knowledge.
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Correct please: Which stands on your knowledge is CORRECT, you made a grammatical blunder, So that was hasb e zarurat grammar you were talking about.
All that you have said is just to console yourself, I would urge you to work hard rather relying on baseless assumptions. If it is not that much complex then it is not that much easy either. It is a competitive exam, everyone is competing, the points I made were very much true, now if someone denies them because he considers it hard to match the standards I would just say following.
دل کے بھلانے کو غالب یہ خیال اچھا ھے
I did not want to point out your more mistakes, I respect your opinion as everyone has his/her own. I did not deny any of your point. I don't agree to what you say, but I will defend your right of saying it till my death.
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Originally Posted by IRRAJ
ger zruri bakwas se b parhez ho
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I have said the same thing in my post, let me pull out my words: "Be to the point in your essay, it must not equivocal and misleading, because examiner doesn't have enough time to find his way in a labyrinth." My dear you must use the words that are commensurate with your dignity as an educated person. You haven't corrected anything, just repeated the same that I said but you did it in some bizarre language. I hope Mods would take notice of it.
P.S: My suggestions were based on my two attempts of competitive exams and alhamdulillah I have never failed in essay paper, All praise and thanks to Allah almighty.
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