Seniors,

Need your guidance regarding the thesis statement in Introduction of an essay.
it would be a perfect way to write thesis statement in following way.For example the topic is on "The Enerygy crisis in Pakistan". Thesis statement for that topic would be as follow.

This Essay will discuss the causes,consequences and remedial measures to overcome the energy crisis in Pakistan.

Kindly do guide me is that ok to write the thesis statement in such way.if not then tell me the proper way.

Looking forward for the valuable guidance .