hmmm sadly saying that FPSC rejected me .... well i m disclosing the main points of essay writing & there are only two main reasons which is the rote cause of fail in essay or low scoring.....
as we all know that to express one's own thoughts on a specific topic is essay....
but the question is this that why our students fail in essay paper on large scale despite having grip on english?
so now it is an open secret as given under....
1. one must not reach on final result/decision in essay (writer kbi bhi nateeja na nikaale bs jo uska apna nukta nigaah hy wo pesh krde magr ye na ho k wo sabit kr ke beth jaaye ke ye ye hy etc)
2. special care must be taken while writing an essay "never give suggestion, advice etc" ( kbi b koi mashwara na deejye bs)

Special note:
the above mentioned thing is the only cause that convert one's essay into fiction, storey, report etc.....
( islye in 2 points ka lehaaz rakh lena dua doge mujhe) agr mujhe reject na kiya jata to shayad ye disclose kbi nhi krta.....

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