I am sharing the outline if my 2010 essay.

I scored 50 in it.

Length was around 1200 to 1400 words maximum.



Topic: can women be equal to men in Pakistan?

1. Introduction.

1.1. Women is needed in every sphere of Pakistan.
1.2. Yes, women can be equal to men in Pakistan.

2. Body.

2.1. Defining the major roles of a woman.

2.1.1. Woman as a mother.
2.1.2. Woman as a wife.
2.1.3. Woman as a daughter.
2.1.4. Woman as a teacher.

2.2. Women situation at Pakistan in past.

2.2.1. Women have been victim of male domination.
2.2.2. Society considered women to be inferior to men in Pakistan.
2.2.3. Women faced economic constraints.
2.2.4. Gender discrimination had been a major issue for women in Pakistan.


2.3. Current situation of women in Pakistan: a positive changing scenario.

2.3.1. Women participating in every sphere in Pakistan.
2.3.2. Women participation in pakistan's legislature.
2.3.3. Women participation in jobs.
2.3.4. Women in Pakistan are standing for their rights.

2.4. Few notable Pakistani women who have proven themselves.

2.4.1. Fatimah Jinnah.
2.4.2. Benazir Bhutto.
2.4.3. Fehmida Mirza.
2.4.4. Shamshad Akhtar.

2.5. Comparing women of Pakistan with the women of those countries who value them.

2.5.1. Pakistan vs. USA.
2.5.2. Pakistan vs. United Kingdom.


2.6. Suggestion to make women equal to men in Pakistan.

2.6.1. Public awareness complains.
2.6.2. Role of media.
2.6.3. Role of society.
2.6.4. Role of government.


3. Conclusion.

3.1. Critical Analysis: Pakistan prosperity depends on giving equal status to women.
3.2. Women should be equal to men in Pakistan.