i attempted sportswomen. my outline did not match with essay. it clearly shows that i have given more emphasis on developing sports facilities for women by enlisting causes and remedies for improvement of the same and given less space to rest of my essay contents in outline by just writing their main headings and not the subheadings. but i remember while writing essay i could hardly write 300-400 words on causes and remedies because of shortage of time and my total essay was not more than 1500 words excluding outline. further there was not any mention of prominent sport woman but cricket, hockey teams etc were generally discussed. seems bad attempt?????what others who have attempted the same essay say about it
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