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Old Thursday, February 20, 2014
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Originally Posted by neebi View Post
Violence is a large refuge of incompetent

Introduction
• Man is a social animal
• Traits differ from person to person
• Positive vs negative activities
• Differences can lead towards conflict
• Conflict acts as first brick of the building of violence
• Thesis statement leading towards conclusion

What is violence?
Conflict as catalyst of violence
Individuals, groups and nations as incompetent
How violence becomes large refuge of incompetent?
• Through oppression
• Tyrant practices
• Threats
• Use of excessive force
• Sectarianism
• Terrorism
• Anarchy
When incompetents replace competent in world?
• Death of logic and reason
• Shun the practice of dialogue
• Reason: a forgotten lesson
• Rampant intolerance
• Hatred
• Absence of patience
• Lack of awareness and education
• Non-existence of ethical and moral values
Violence vs. dialogue
Violence leads towards more violence
Violence in shape of terrorism and oppression: a global scenario
• American occupation of Afghanistan and Iraq
• War on terror
• 9/11 attacks
• Indian oppression in Kashmir
• Mumbai attacks
• Israel- Palestine conflict
• Clash of civilizations
Pakistan: as a case study
• TTP and terrorist attacks
• Sectarianism
• Intolerance
• Ethnic and linguistic violence
• Political oppression
Remedial measures to curb the incompetents from using violence as large refugee
• Lessons from the life of prophet Muhammad (pbuh)
• Tolerance and patience
• Dialogue
• Reasoning and logic
• Encouraging competent, discouraging incompetent elements
conclusion
• Death of logic, reason and argumentation levels the ground for the incompetent elements to use violence as large refuge.
• Intolerance, patience and dialogue are the way out from this menace.


note:i wrote this essay and in our center of Bahawalpur no correction was done to replace "large as last".
seniors please check my outline and comment about it.thanks
Brother as essay is argumentative, it seems that you have taken it correctly, n0w your expressions in essay will determine whether you can clear it or not. All the best,
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