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The history of civilization shows how man always has to choose between making the right and wrong use of the discoveries of science.this has never been more true than in our own age.in a brief period amazing discoveries have been made and applied to practical purpose.
it would be ungrateful not to recognize how immense are the boons which science has given to mankind.it has brought within the reach of multitudes benefits and advantages which only a short time ago were the privilege of the few.it has shown how malnutrition,hunger and disease can be overcome. it has not only lengthened life but it has deepened its quality.field of knowledge,experience and recreation open in the past to a few ,have been thrown to open to millions.through the work of science the ordinary man today has been given the opportunity of a longer and fuller life than was ever possible his grandparents.

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The history of civilization reflects that man is indecisive about use of the discoveries of the science.it is very true that science in very short span of time have discoveries and applied in practical life of mankind.it would be injustice to estimate the benefits which science has given to mankind in a very less period and empower people to advantage of it before this only few get it. it has given techniques to rectify the the different problems of mankind .science has improve the standards of life and knowledge has stretched from few people to millions. development of science has given equal chance to every individual to stretch his lifer longer which their fore father was enable to do.

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