AssalamOalaikuM!
I am sharing my own parody with you and waiting for your comments on it -
hazal
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bijlee ab raat bhar naheeN aatee
koi Soorat nazar naheeN aatee
jab se mere ghar aa.ee ho begum !
koi aChChee khabar naheeN aatee
naak meN dam kiyaa hai nazlay ne
CHeenk aatee hai par naheeN aatee
aatee hai woh cousin ki shaadee meN
daadee ki mot par naheeN aatee
"bus" meN paRhtaa hooN aayat.ul.kursee
keh du'aa-e-safar naheeN aatee
sab ne make-up kiyaa hu.aa hai yahaaN
buree Soorat nazar naheeN aatee
ka'bah se bhi ho aayaa hooN :Ghalib:
sharm mujh ko magar naheeN aatee
