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After days and days of brainstorming and going through the outlines of people who have qualified previous css attempts, i believe outline for this essay should be like this.

Current image of Pakistan
Fundamentalists
Extremists
Terrorists
Male chauvinism
Beggars
Lack of opportunities (education, employment, sports)
Lack of freedom of speech
Gender discrimination
How women sportspersons deny this and portray soft image of Pakistan
Women sportspersons deny honour killing
Deny house arrest
Deny acid throwing
Deny Male chauvinism
Deny gender discrimination
Deny women rights persecution
Deny the fact that blood is cheaper than water
Women sports person depict a society where following prevails
Freedom of speech
Right of choice
Equal.opportunities
Progressive society
Conclusion women sportspersons effectively portray soft image of pakistan..
I curse myself for wandering around the topic and not hitting the hammer at hot iron..aspirants i believe it is not compulsory to start writing every topic with stereotype style such as
Intro
History
Body
Drawbacks
Recommendations
Conclusion etc etc.......
Essay style should be as per the demand og topic if it is arguementative than it should be full of arguements.
Anyone may differ with me but this is truth that can be verified by comparing outlines of successful candidates with the failures..
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