Its not about applying wrong and illogical solution to any problem.You took it incorrectly.Conversely,it emphasises that every solution in general breeds a new problem having a different scope and dimension.Futhermore,there are also some minor grammatical errors such as in line No.1 the use of article was unneeded as you talked about human problems generally.Similarly,in line No 2 You should have used a simile to compare the problems of people with a convoluted road in order to make it metaphorically understandable.

Overall,I both liked and enjoyed reading your expansion.If it was just a beginning,I can guarantee that that is too much room for improvement as far you current level is concerned.keep practicing writing english on daily basis for at least 1- 2 hours and then just see the results.You will ultimately master writing english irrespective of whether it is an essay,a precis or an expansion.

Good Luck.Take Care