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here is my outline practice. Critical analysis would be appreciated and seniors are requested in particular.

Great Nations win without Fighting

Thesis Statement
Fighting wars is not essential for a nation to become great rather social, economic, and political development within a nation are the avenues which makes the name of a country exemplary.

Outline
1. Introduction
2. Concept of victory has changed over time
3. Preconditions to become a great nation
a. Strong economy
b. Political stability
c. Rule of law
d. Social justice
e. Self-reliance
f. Increased rate of education
g. Technological and industrial self sufficiency
h. Thriving sector of R&D
i. High standards of living
j. Cultural influence
k. Strong character of citizens

4. Pakistan has several challenges to fight with
a. Extremism
b. Lack of political stability
c. Absence of rule of law
d. Clash between state institutions
e. Imbedded corruption
f. Invasion of foreign culture
g. Poor education standards and lack of facilities
h. Unbridled media

5. Suggested way outs can be
a. Political will is an utmost priority
b. Sustained economic policies needs at large
c. Overhauling of the political institutions
d. Justice should be readily available
e. Media should play a responsible role
f. Emergency measures should be undertaken for education improvement
g. Law and order implementation
h. Culture of self-sufficiency should be introduced
i. Preservation of Pakistani and Islamic values

6. Conclusion