Originally Posted by futuristic

I wrote on the similar topic.
Essay was related to How sportswomen are creating soft image? we had to answer this Soft image was the main target ...look my outline...i donot remeber the whole but it was like this:
1.Women sportsperson representing an egalitarian society
2.Representing a tolerant society.
3.women sportspersons inspiring other womens.
4.Presenting a new Pakistan
5.Need of the softer image

in these headliept that i presented the concept that how image of Pakistan has been tarnished and how beautifully our womens in sports have created a new,soft,better image through their hardwork,determination,endurance and backing by Pakistani people
i am no body to judge essays but its my perspective.
Best of luck